Balance of Terror There were several scenes excluded from this episode. The first
cut scene is an effects shot with dialog explaining to some degree
why the Romulan ship is saucer shaped with protruding nacelles. It
also explains Mr. Stiles reference to spies in the televised version
of the script.
INSERT - SHIP'S VIEWING SCREEN
The attacking vessel can now be seen definitely to be some modified
version of a starship saucer main section... but with the dark markings
on its underside which suggests a bird-of-prey with half-spread wings.
And centered there is a threatening-looking "weapon tube" device.
We see it in full size only momentarily.. then it launches a torpedo-like
bolt of blinding energy from the weapons tube.
HANSON'S VOICE
You see it, Enterprise?! Starship design. Warn Earth...
This next deleted scene shows the head technician sauntering back
and forth observing the read outs on the control panels. The scene
was most likely shortened to hasten the pace of the show.
This next sequence was to occur just before the Enterprise bridge
scene when Rand enters and asks Kirk if she should continue making
log entries.
It was probably cut because it slows the pacing of the episode and
for time.
What is interesting about the Romulan dialog is its cadence,
which is almost poetic in nature.
INT. ROMULAN SHIP'S BRIDGE - COMMANDER
AND CENTURION
The Centurion lies on the Commander's couch - and we can tell he is
badly injured. The Commander sits nearby, tending to him... The Commander
gently lifts the Centurion's head, and tries to get him to drink a
medicine. He tries, but turns from it, gagging with pain.
CENTURION
My chest. I cannot swallow.
The Commander looks worriedly at him
- then lowers his head back onto the
pillow-like armrest of the couch...
Decius approaches the Commander... His
eyes glitter and he bows with eager respectfulness.
DECIUS
Commander, I know now why you were honored with leadership!
Our mission is all we hoped! The Praetor will be pleased!
COMMANDER
(looks up at him - coldly)
His joy warms my life.
DECIUS
(crowing)
How they tried to flee! - like a
field creature from a hunting bird. A happy sight --
COMMANDER
May your Praetor have his wish then. Death!
The Commander whirls, dismisses Decius with a scornful gesture. The
young officer's face freezes hard.
He bows curtly, turns on his heels to exit...
Painfully, his breath
rasping in his throat, the Centurion reaches out for the Commander's
arm.
CENTURION
(weak whisper)
Be wise, good friend... see the danger where it lies.
The Centurion is suddenly gripped
with pain... gritting his teeth not to show his anguish.
Gently,
the Commander tries
to comfort him.
This next cut scene is towards the end of the episode
with Kirk saluting the Romulan commander.
Just before the Romulan Commander destroys
his ship, Kirk salutes him.
The Commander responds with a
stiffly-precise small bow.
From this point the episode continues on as televised.
There are several other interesting behind the scenes aspects to
this episode. When filming it is sometimes wise to shoot a safety
take.
A “Safety” is an additional take, done after a successful
take, as a backup. The take which was used showing Nimoy in the phaser
room is rife with purple smoke and could have easily obscured the action
of the scene.
If after viewing the footage it was discovered that
the scene was unusable, it would be very expensive to re-shoot the
scene as the set may have already
been dismantled, the cost of overtime for
the crew, putting the production behind schedule, etc. With this as
a possibility a safety is shot. The safety scene shows the same action,
but without the purple smoke. The smoke could be added later as a double
exposure, an inexpensive effect if the the scene warranted it.
Its interesting that the Enterprise's interior
set design for the bridge uses a color palette of mostly additive colors;
red, green and blue, whereas the Romulan ship uses mostly the subtractive
colors of cyan, magenta and yellow.
Thanks to Dave T. for the Balance of
Terror clips. Thanks
to Christopher
B. for
the Kirk saluting
scene, and the
additional scenes
including the
commander bowing
and the safety
phaser room scene.
Thanks to David E. for the script excerpts.